Joined: 14 Feb 2004 Posts: 1105 Location: Stockton/Frisco Country:
Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 1:42 am Post subject: Poetry, share yours here!
Hey, I just wanted to share this poem with everybody, and I would love to read what others have written, it can be about anything (your fav. stars, love, etc.)
You
Lies, lies, lies
Is all she tells me
Promises, promises, promises
She always break
Excuses, excuses, excuses
There's always one up her sleeves
Yelling, yelling, yelling
About every little thing
Swearing, swearing, swearing
She just can't stop
Blaming, blaming, blaming
When it's her fault
Sad, disappointed, betrayed
When she tells me lies
Sad, broken hearted, mad
When she never comes through
Sad, outraged, fraustrated
With all the silly excuses
Unloved, annoyed, angry
With her useless constant yelling
Unloved, unrespected, belittled
By her continuous swearing
Unloved, hated, hatred
When it's not my fault
Joined: 07 Apr 2002 Posts: 2495 Location: Wales Country:
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 4:06 am Post subject:
i don't write nor understand poetry at all.... but in highschool most of the girls there were aspiring poets.. so i think u should have some luck from the ladies in this board...
Joined: 01 Apr 2004 Posts: 1170 Location: New York City Country:
Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 6:31 am Post subject:
here is a poem i know, its a true story by the way...
"i was walkin down the hall"
"scratchin my balls"
"the next thing you know, my balls got stuck in the
elevator door!"
"then my mother said"
"did it turn,
Red?
Blue?
Purple or green?
"and that was the end of my ding -o-ling , ling"
Joined: 21 Feb 2005 Posts: 252 Location: Region 4 Country:
Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 11:13 am Post subject:
TANG wrote:
here is a poem i know, its a true story by the way...
"i was walkin down the hall"
"scratchin my balls"
"the next thing you know, my balls got stuck in the
elevator door!"
"then my mother said"
"did it turn,
Red?
Blue?
Purple or green?
"and that was the end of my ding -o-ling , ling"
Joined: 01 Apr 2004 Posts: 1170 Location: New York City Country:
Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 11:59 am Post subject:
chrisyukiefan wrote:
Oh.. don't be shy... AYa said to me... hehehe Post your Poem's here...
aaaaww u met aya?
thats what Will said to me too! (Will is just some korean man who works down the street, that i am in llluuuuuuuuuuuuuv with )
anyways i will post one or two just lemme dig em out of my folders!
Joined: 21 Feb 2005 Posts: 252 Location: Region 4 Country:
Posted: Mon Mar 07, 2005 9:01 am Post subject:
SOMEONE THAT IS TRUE
I was alone all by myself
Staring at the twinkling lights
Embarassed by the night's breeze
Wondering without thinking
Then a hand awakened my wisdom
Showed a smile of real pureness
Speaks the word of true calmness
And heals my heart towards its deepness
I looked straight to her pretty eyes
And I felt all the words that she said
No lies, no doubts and hesitations
Until the coldness of night was gone
Now, it's time for us to leave
Walking towards where we should be
Even if it's hard but deep within me
I will never forget, someone that is true... _________________
Joined: 21 Feb 2005 Posts: 252 Location: Region 4 Country:
Posted: Mon Mar 07, 2005 9:04 am Post subject:
TANG wrote:
aaaaww u met aya?
thats what Will said to me too! (Will is just some korean man who works down the street, that i am in llluuuuuuuuuuuuuv with )
anyways i will post one or two just lemme dig em out of my folders!
chrisyukiefan is a great friend of mine, my classmate and my comrade in any weird things! _________________
Joined: 12 Feb 2005 Posts: 5 Location: pasig Country:
Posted: Mon Mar 07, 2005 9:13 am Post subject:
Uncertainly
I was once in love with someone
But our love suddenly came up to end
She once made my whole life fun
She's my love and my dearest friend
I love her and she loves me too
She cares for me the way I do
But still, we don't understand each other
So guess, it's time to say, "our love's over"
Maybe it's our destiny to be apart
Or a challenge that we need to face
If she really has the other half of my heart
It will find a way to follow it's trace
But if not, maybe this is the right decision
To put an end for the love that we had
I just can't let myself to be imprisoned
In her love, that understanding can't last
So now, Im afraid to fall in love again
Scared with this new girl might bring the same pain
Do I have to let her open the door of my heart
Or simply close it because she might tear it apart
If I shut my heart and ignore her, would it be fair?
What if, she really deserved my love and care?
Well, I guess.... I'll just wait for fear to be over
But what if it's endless, will she wait for me forever?
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