I've not seen dragonhead yet but I will look out to it. Usually, I'm in with weird story as well. I enjoy weird art film sometime.
Betsy Hayashi wrote:The gondola's chase is a great idea !!!!!!! Oh, are the guys wearing special clothes ???? I mean, Do they scream "henshin" and got dressed in armors, just like that tokusatsu series ????
I'm still thinking of whether their going to be the Tokusatsu hero or not. :crazy:
zaza_tk87 wrote:can I know what's the story is all about, aka-san? is it good?
The setting was in ancient time. Nomuro Mansai played as a shaman while Ito was his friend from a noble blood. Basically, they fight evil spirits. I love the story!!!
(Ok, I’m not going to be funny here, ‘cause I like serious battle for the “serious leader”?? yeah, I always create fighting scene a bit long so I make it into two posts and I hope I don’t bore you gals to death :sweat: )
Aka Vs. Masa
*KZ6 got light injury* said Aka through her communi-watch.
*We’re still on the run from the Inocchi and Hiroshi* reported Pati
*Sakamoto is getting closer, I have to make a run myself..take care of yourself!* She smiled. I’m always looking forward to this one on one battle. She disappeared into the night with her red cloak.
I just saw her running through that tunnel Sakamoto stopped for a while and making sure that he was still on the right track. There she goes again! He chased her again until he reached a dark tunnel. It was very quiet and he could only hear some water dripping from a distance.
*Hey, red lady? You have a name?* He broke the silence and his voice echoed in that dark tunnel. Nobody was answering. Suddenly, a wind sound passed by next to him, Sakamoto turned his back to check. No one was near him. He shivered a bit. Now I know how it feels like to be in suspense thriller movie, he thought for a while.
Cluck..cluck..cluck..a sound of heels slowly getting nearer and nearer. Sakamoto prepared himself. Sscrrecch…a big rodden passed his feet..Yikes!! He got surprised. At that moment Aka appeared from behind and he was unaware of her presence. She gave him a surprise attack.
Sakamoto felt a sudden grab and caress on his arms.
*Wooo..you’re buff.* she whispered in his ear.
*You’re not going to get anything from me.* He retaliate and tried to hit her face with his elbow. Aka smoothly evaded.
*I love strong man!* She moved backward and released his arms. Aka pulled out two small daggers with crescent moon shape, at that same moment Sakamoto took out his sword. He ran toward her…hyaaaa……………the battle could not be avoided. Clamoring sounds in the tunnel echoed like a thunder. Every time their weapons slammed a flash of lightning appeared. She was facing a tough opponent this time. Hmm..from what she heard, this guy was afraid of height. Without thinking further Aka tried to lure him out from the tunnel. Every time he thumped his sword, she only eluded from his attack. You see, girls, Sakamoto was the only member who could not fly but he could run very fast like the wind (name any wind, imagine the flash..). Aka moved her right hand as if she was making a stroke and as she opened her palm with her inner strength, she dragged Sakamoto closer to her. But Sakamoto was not giving up that easily, Aka pulled all of her strength…*GOTCHA!!!* She wrapped him around with her hands and took him for a thrill ride!!…..SWOOOOOSSSHH…She went up to the air.
*OKASAAn!!!* He cried while looking down below. All he could see was tiny dots of houses, docks, boats and some gondolas...Aka laughed hysterically. Sakamoto closed his eyes real tight as he leaned his head over Aka’s shoulder (hehehehe..it’s my turn to have some fun girls) and held her firmly. *So, I’m going higher!*
*No!!!!*
*Oh yes!!!* She flew straight up penetrating clouds, and then she stopped. *You’ve missed the whole world if you keep on closing your eyes.* said Aka. Sakamoto tried to slowly open his eyes but he quickly closed it again. *You really are a baby.* She pinched his right cheek and this time she dived down like a bullet and went up again to fly straight while Sakamoto still held on to her tightly.
*Yoo hoo!! Can I join you?!* Suddenly Joe appeared next to her. *We finally meet again.*
*Joe is that you?!*
*I see that you’re having fun Sakamoto!*
*Save me! You idiot!* he yelled.
*No problemo.*
Joe flew closer to Aka and he started to distract her with another silly animal stanches again. Aka struggle to keep Sakamoto in her hand while battling him. When Joe gave a punch to her she caught it with her hands. They smoothly battled and evaded the strikes and Sakamoto, oh well, he still clung on to Aka.
She has improved a lot, thought Joe. What to do? Alright, I just have to do it the rough way.
*Gomenasai Sakamoto-kun!*
*What are you going to do?!*
Before Sakamoto could asked anything more, Joe was behind Aka and quickly grabbed his legs. He tried to pull it.
*hey don’t drag my pants you moron!* warned Sakamoto. At that crisis situation, Aka still managed to take a sneak peak. Yabaii!! She giggled. Well, his pants were still at the right place as a matter of fact.
*I’m trying! Oh boy she’s strong.* He kept on trying to pull his legs. *Oy..you’re not giving much help here, release your hands from her!*
*No!*
*You should, or I won’t be able to help you out with this.*
*Promise you will catch me!*
*I promise!*
Sakamoto release his hands but too bad Aka kicked Joe’s head so he missed catching him. He fell off.
*AAARRRGGHhhh…you idiot, I don’t know anything about flying stance!* He shouted.
Whopp….*Got you!* Aka got him again. Sakamoto’s feeling was mixed he was relieved and yet upset at the same time. It’s her again.
*Oh no you don’t!* Joe pushed her aside and she lost her grips on Sakamoto, he fell off again.*NOOOOO!! Baka!!*
But this time Joe managed to catch one of his hands. *Got you!*
*Oh no you don’t* She slapped his head.
*Itaii!* Joe covered his head with both of his hands and Sakamoto fell off for the third time.
*WHYYYY!???* He shouted. * I really need to learn flying stance!* he mumbled while kept on falling off, penetrating one cloud to another. Puff..puff..
*Gotcha!* said Aka. * You really should thank me for this.*
*Oh no you don’t* Joe barged in again.
*Aw brother!!* Sakamoto gave up, he did not care whether he would fall again. Aka got absolutely mad with Joe, she kicked him right on the..*cough* nuts?! But Joe managed to cover it with both hands. Before Sakamoto fell off again, Aka immediately grabbed his arms, however since he got tired of being ping pong around he dived down.
*NOOO!!!!* Joe shouted. *Look what you’ve done, woman!* He followed him down, diving like a bullet.
Aka clicked his pin and called the main control room. *I need backup on the ground.*
*My lady I’m at your service!* KZ6 replied.
*How’s everything zaza?* she asked.
*Inocchi and Nagano are still tailing Pati and Rinrin. They’re near the canal.
*KZ6…prepare yourself!*
*Yes my lady!*
*Zaza…please do me a favor.*
*what is it Lady Aka?*
*Make sure you get the right coordinate.*
*Aye-aye ma’am!*
I'm not bored to death, truly. you got the special gift in giving details, that's why the story is really good.. details here and there.. good chapter 4 sure :applaud:
I'm going to miss few pages of this thread again since I'm going to a mathcamp for a week :sweat: duh... studying sucks
Phew...finally caught with reading all the posts and reading the story! :sweat:
Awesome job you guys! I got hypnotic powers! COOL!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Hey if someone out there is good at drawing manga style you guys can make a full on comic here! Yeah, then everyone can quit their jobs, move to Japan and become manga artists! Yeah!! (nice dream!! :mrgreen: )
Seriously though, I love this story it's great!!! :applaud:
zaza_tk87 wrote:I'm going to miss few pages of this thread again since I'm going to a mathcamp for a week duh... studying sucks
Eeeewwwwgh! Glad I don't have to do that kinda stuff anymore. I guess being an old lady has some advantages! :beaten:
Hey Aka is there someway to write in a scene of me riding around on a motorcycle somewhere? I've always wanted to ride one, but it's too freakin' expensive for me. If it's too hard to write in don't worry about it, just thought I'd ask. :P
Rinrin wrote:Eeeewwwwgh! Glad I don't have to do that kinda stuff anymore. I guess being an old lady has some advantages!
:hehe: I really want to grow up quicker... to see the world.. since my parents are overprotective :sweat: so being an adult also one of my dreams ( weird..huh :sweat: ) yeah.. so I can do merely anything I want.. *Duh
bye... I'm going to see numbers for a week.. no internet, no movie, no drama... oooOOoOOo
:shakehead:
*BOWING* Thank you for liking the chapter girls. Since there are so many inputs for the Gondola chase, It might take a while for me to incorproate it. I hope you gals be patient.
Zaza..good luck with your mathchamp! and please do enjoy your youth days, it's very precious. Growing up means more responsibility and sometimes it's quite a pain..heheheehehe :beaten: Don't worry I'm going to upload it all in the briefcase ;)
Oh..Rinrin, the motorcycle thing...I'm actually thinking of that at the first place so don't worry about it I might going to put it. You and Nagano..well what do you say?
Angel, you're not one of the oldest here. I'm nearing 30 yrs old...hehehehee...I was born long before you.
Akakage wrote:Oh..Rinrin, the motorcycle thing...I'm actually thinking of that at the first place so don't worry about it I might going to put it. You and Nagano..well what do you say?
Woo Hoo! Thank you thank you thank you! I love this idea! Umm...you're gonna actually let me get close to your stalking victim No. 3?! :google:
Angel, you're not one of the oldest here. I'm nearing 30 yrs old...hehehehee...I was born long before you.
Hehe! I beat all of you! I'm nearing 40! I'm the ultimate sukebe obaachan! :beaten:
Sugoi, sugoi, Aka-chan !!!!!!!! :applaud: :applaud: Good job as always !!!!
Zaza-chan, enjoy your stay there. When you get older, you'll wish to be young again, as I do ...
Sounds good to me! *Theme from Superman It's a bird, It's a plane, It's Super Sukebe Obaachans No.'s 1 & 2
:lol: :lol: :lol: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
*rolling in the ground in tears*
Rinrin wrote:Sounds good to me! *Theme from Superman It's a bird, It's a plane, It's Super Sukebe Obaachans No.'s 1 & 2 :beaten:
Hmmm...jetlag still seems to be affecting me! :hehe:
:lol: Sukebe Obachan...oh goodness..you really need to warm yourself in a bubble bath to help you sleep..and no..imagining any of the V6 members.. :hehe:
This episode is going to be so long I hope it's good. :sweat: I haven't finished it all. Only two parts yet...still more to come.
THE GONDOLA CHASE!!!
Human Propeller thingy
*Calling Pati, calling Rinrin! This is Zaza!*
*We’re still on the run and Junichi is with us*
*where’s Go?*
*Hirari and Angel are with him, * said Rinrin. *Jewel is tailing on Ken now.*
*Good, I’m going to beam down KZ6. He is on the Westside of the Grand Canal!*
*We’re going over there!* said both of them. They jumped from one roof top to another. Not so far from them were Inocchi and Nagano who persistently following them.
*Wow Inocchi , they’re so fast.* said Nagano. * I think it’s time for….*
*save it for later! No time for henshin thingy now!*
*Aww..you spoil the fun!*
*Quick they go on board that Gondola*
Hehehehehehe…KZ6 had been waiting for them in the west of the Grand Canal. He stood still on a gondola while holding a paddle. Rinrin and Pati went on board with Junichi who was somewhat trying to neutralize the influence of wonder woman lasso.
*Quick! Paddle up!* Pati ordered KZ6.
Nagano and Inocchi jumped onto the nearest Gondola, but before they started to paddle it, KZ6 has moved so fast like the wind.
*Waaa!!! So Fast!!* Inocchi scratched his head. *It can’t be!* he was startled seeing their Gondola was moving too fast. What they did not know was that the squad has KZ6, who has psycho power (usually sick people like him have more than just a power. For example when you have beat him so badly, he still managed to get up and feeling fresh, you got the picture) and of course Rinrin constantly whipping him with Aka’s wonder woman lasso since that was the only lasso that he’d obey. *Faster!!* The more she whipped the more excited KZ6 could be (sounds like the Dominatrix and her toy) and he was getting faster and faster. Junichi was slowly regaining his consciousness.
*Nagano, is he a man or a satan?* Inocchi pointed at KZ6
*I’ve no idea myself.* Nagano was striving so hard to get closer. *I think my strength is running out of power.* As he checked his wrist band which was beeping in red light. Nagano has this wrist power which could detect and recharge his level of power (yeah just like tokusatsu hero thingy but he was just semi-tokusatsu not full tokusatsu yet.). *I’m going to push this Gondola…hang on!* Inocchi dived in the water and went up to the surface on the back of the Gondola. *Ready Nagano..!!* Nagano nodded. Inocchi held onto the edge of the Gondola from the bottom. Suddenly he twirled himself underwater just like a propeller boat, he realized if he did that he was going to make himself really sick. *WOOOO…* Nagano started to paddle and he felt a sudden boost came out from the water. *hhhuuuuu…rrrr yyyyy..*
*What did you say?* asked Nagano who was paddling the Gondola.
*aaa...Iiii….sssss aaaaa iiiidd… Hhuurrrr..rryyyy..*Inocchi’s voice trembling. Oh well why do you know, he was turning himself into human propeller boat?! But it did give the Gondola hundred times faster and they were even getting closer to the opponent.
Meanwhile, up in the air another chase still occurred. Aka still was still holding Sakamoto’s arm while Joe dived down behind them. They moved so fast, faster than a bullet.
*Girls, tell me your coordinate, I’m heading down so fast here!!* Aka called Rinrin and Pati.
*Still on the west side and we’re struggling from their chase.* Pat informed.
*I see you now.* said Aka.
*Hey..I don’t want to fall on your Gondola!!* Sakamoto cried while trying to release her grip. At last after couple of second of struggle he managed to release his arm dived faster down to the water. *Damn!* said Aka as she landed gracefully on the Gondola and joined Pati, Rinrin and KZ6. She saw Junichi was slowly recovering from the influence of the lasso as he tapped on his head and complaining of his headache.
SPLASSH!! Sakamoto missed Inocchi and Nagano’s Gondola. He caused quite a big wave which managed to unbalance their Gondola.
*What’s that?!* Nagano looking confused. He was struggling to balance the Gondola but too bad, the Gondola was overturn, and another more splash occurred again. It was Joe, he was landing in between Sakamoto and Inocchi. In a distance, KZ6 laughed so hard and it was caught by Joe. *OH NO!!! It’s him!! The Psycho dude!* He pointed directly to KZ6 who was paddling like crazy.
*We’re nearing Aegean Sea, My lady.* reported KZ6
*Prepare the transformation.*
*Yes..!* KZ6 clicked on a button somewhere located on the paddle and all of sudden the Gondola transformed into super gondola jet.
*Oh Look!!* Nagano pointed. *How are we going to follow them if we look like real shipwreck here.* He sighed. Inocchi was trying to get a hold of himself after that stupid human propeller stunt. He felt a bit sick and wanted to vomit.
*Ewww…Don’t do it in front of me dude!!* said Sakamoto. Inocchi covered his mouth feeling dizzy and nauseous.
*Don’t worry guys, I have a Jet sky that I’ve prepared at every corner of the Canal.* He clicked on a button on his wrist watch. A big metal box emerged from the bottom of the water and it automatically opened. *Guys..may I present, the Super Jet Ski.* Without further ado, they hopped on the Super Jet ski and began to chase the Squad into the Aegean Sea *Yeee haaa…* Joe was making silly cowboy yell.
*Aka they’re getting closer with the Jet ski.* Pati reported. At the same time Junichi was fully recovered from the lasso influence. Seeing his friends were trying to salvage him. He stood up and tried to distract KZ6 from steering the boat properly.
*Stop him!* Aka ordered. Pati and Rinrin quickly moved forward to hold Junichi down from distracting KZ6.
*Calling I Luv and Valle!!* Aka pressed the communi-watch.
*Yes Aka!*
*We need more backup!*
*Right away!*
Another fight on the Super Gondola Jet took place. Junichi was struggling to fight Pati and Rinrin at the same time. Aka has not decided to interrupt the fighting. She turned her back to see how far his comrades managed to get closer. It seemed that Sakamoto and his gang were getting closer and closer. Rinrin realized that situation too; she exchanged glances with Aka and saw her giving a code. Without explanation, Rinrin closed her eyes and began to chant for hypnotism. He targeted Nagano to be influenced by her. Nagano’s head received some weird frequency and he saw Rinrin flew with Junichi’s in her hands. He even saw Junichi’s crying for help and moved his direction to the nearest dock.
*Nagano what are you doing!!!!* Inocchi shouted because he was confused seeing him moving for another direction while Junichi was actually still with the squad.
Rinrin smiled since her spell worked wonders, she flew to the dock and landed there. Hmm..it’s going to waste my energy flying and jumping around with this guy. She saw a motorcycle parked near the dock and rode it. Nagano jumped from the Jet ski to the port he also saw another motorcycle parked near there and hoped onto it to chase Rinrin.
*Good, he’s fallen into Rinrin’s trap.* Aka smiled. She immediately barged in the fight between Pati and Junichi. *Are you ready for me?* she grinned. That was the first time Junichi was facing her. He became so pale seeing very close to him. However, Joe and Sakamoto’s Jet Skies were now so close to them.
*Junichi, don’t worry we’re coming to save you!!* Sakamoto yelled. He put the Jet Ski in auto-censor drive (why the censor? So it can detect any object that will hinder the way and the jet will be able to evade it.) and tried to stand on the seat whilst trying to reach Junichi at the same time. KZ6 took action he attempted to bump Sakamoto’s Jet Ski.
*Oh no you don’t!* Joe and Inocchi shouted at him while pulling another secret weapon from their jacket. It was an automatic arrow launcher which has a form like regular gun but once the trigger pulled it could launch 15 small arrows at the same time. KZ6 and the squad dodge their head to avoid getting the arrow while Junichi took the chance to try to reach out to Sakamoto. When Junichi’s hand was almost reaching Sakamoto’s a sudden attack came along from up in the air. It was I Luv and Valle who were shooting their arrows which have been covered by poison ivy potion (you just get the itchaiming for Inocchi and Joe.
*EVADE!!!!* Inocchi shouted. *Don’t let that poisonous arrow get into you!!* So, they spread again...
To be continued…Phew..(It gives me the excitement in writing this, I hope you feel the same to while reading it. I haven’t finish it all but I will post the rest later about this Gondola chase and also the Motorcycle thingy…after that it will be the one with Ken, Betsy and Jewel…aaarrgghhh…I’m going nuts…)
wow.. so many episode of story i need to catch up.. and so many i need to upload tml morning.. eheh .. nice job galz.. this story is getting more and more interesting..
Great thankz to aka... btw aka.. who do u wan to credit the story to? pls tell me.. thx
can wait for the next episode.. and the episode where me and Betsy will be able to 'touch' ken.. ehehe *wad im tinking? :nut: :nut: :sweat: *
Jewel wrote:wow.. so many episode of story i need to catch up.. and so many i need to upload tml morning.. eheh .. nice job galz.. this story is getting more and more interesting..
Great thankz to aka... btw aka.. who do u wan to credit the story to? pls tell me.. thx
can wait for the next episode.. and the episode where me and Betsy will be able to 'touch' ken.. ehehe *wad im tinking? :nut: :nut: :sweat: *
I've uploaded the story until the last two I've posted in the yahoo briefcase.
Although I mostly wrote the story for the last few days, as you can see in my long posts but I really have to thank you to the girls here who have given me so many inspirations and inputs, especially to Pati and Angel who were also contributed some part of the chapters. Since they are busy at the moment with school, that's why I'm taking over the whole chapter.
Still, I'd credited to the V6 STALKER SQUAD ;) Without them there won't be any story like this!!
Hirari Chan wrote:Yay Aka! Good story!!! :applaud: :applaud: :applaud:
Bleah...sorry I've been M.I.A. I went back to work this week, so I'm tired all the time now. Sucks!!
WORK SUCKS in general!! I got 12 reports that I need to review this weekend.. :nut: :beaten:
YES AKA LEADER... I:hehe: :hehe: I'll start my work tml.. err.. i mean uploading the stories to my website.. eehhehe :hehe: :hehe:
i've created another wallpaper today.. (coz i has a day off from my work.. finally... im back to create wallpapers..) Hope to be able to make more wallpapers during saturday and sunday..
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