Hehehehe... :sweat: I am so so so so glad that both of you like it. Since I'm not a die hard romantic, I was quite struggling myself to put the right words for those chapters.. :beaten:
What do I do in my life? like what? you mean my day job? I've mentioned in this thread already...Bengoshi...bleah :beaten:
Basically, writing is part of my hobby. I am a professional daydreamer :P I usually write during midnight onwards..that's where my brain start to tick! ;)
Love the pic Aka!! Okada is so kawaiiiii!!!!! :mrgreen:
Waaa..that was a good mushy scene? :beaten: I thought I was so worse :sweat: OH..NO!! must get rid off my mushy frequency..I need to gather strength for the action.. :beaten:
Yeah..Angel..Hayaku genki ni natte !!!! Or I will be like this :nut:
That Okada Pic?hehehehe that was from an old magazine that I nicked from a Japanese Restaurant... :hehe: Hey..what can you do when you flipp the pages and you see ..eh..Gackt..barechested..and then..eh..what Okada so cute... :hehe: :hehe: I gotta to take it home with me..and share it with you girls ;)
Akakage wrote:That Okada Pic?hehehehe that was from an old magazine that I nicked from a Japanese Restaurant... :hehe: Hey..what can you do when you flipp the pages and you see ..eh..Gackt..barechested..and then..eh..what Okada so cute... :hehe: :hehe: I gotta to take it home with me..and share it with you girls ;)
:rofl: Just be careful when you do stuff like that! I don't wanna be watching CNN & then hear about a young lady being arrested for stealing a Japanese magazine with hot guys in it!! :hehe:
galz.. i wun be able to upload the stalking story tis week.. coz there's some connection problems to the internet with my house computer.. im using my office com to reply this now.. i hope tat my boss doesnt pop out from no where to spot check me right now. :hehe: :hehe:
wat i can do now i to copy the story home on a floppy disk and read it at home and create the webpages.. and once my internet is ready.. i'll upload the stories asap..
Aka.. the Junichi wallpapers looks great~
Aka and Angel.. both of u are a great team of writers.. the story is realli cool man.. ahah...
Angel.. thx for adding me into your msn.. =)
okok.. i cant type realli long reply now.. gtg.. take carez galz.. :D
Jewel wrote:galz.. i wun be able to upload the stalking story tis week.. coz there's some connection problems to the internet with my house computer.. im using my office com to reply this now.. i hope tat my boss doesnt pop out from no where to spot check me right now. :hehe: :hehe:
wat i can do now i to copy the story home on a floppy disk and read it at home and create the webpages.. and once my internet is ready.. i'll upload the stories asap..
No worries Jewel..We'll be patient for that :) Thanks again for uploading in your webby..Hmm..I wonder if other ppl really read that..they must've thought whoever wrote that must've had suffered from serious injuries in the head which made them so dead crazy..
Jewel wrote:Aka.. the Junichi wallpapers looks great~
Thanks to the Japanese Restaurant... :hehe:
Hey you can even upload that in your webby ...hehehe..
Jewel wrote:Aka and Angel.. both of u are a great team of writers.. the story is realli cool man.. ahah...
:hehe: :beaten: Does this mean that I should really give up my day job?
Rinrin wrote: :rofl: Just be careful when you do stuff like that! I don't wanna be watching CNN & then hear about a young lady being arrested for stealing a Japanese magazine with hot guys in it!! :hehe:
Just wait until the disappearance of the hot guys in the world..you know where to find it right? :hehe:
valle wrote:food poisening?auch~that's pain (>_<)
anyway,going off for fysics and german exam..wish me some luck (-_-)
Gambatte, Valle-chan !!!! Uh, I hate physics !!!!!! :google:
Angel-chan, I hope you'll get well soon !!!!! Food poisoning is the hell !!!!
And Aka-chan, that goes for you too !!!!
My God, lot of people here are getting sick !!!!!
Akakage wrote:Hehehehe... :sweat: I am so so so so glad that both of you like it. Since I'm not a die hard romantic, I was quite struggling myself to put the right words for those chapters.. :beaten:
what?? that's what you called 'not good in romantic scene??' :crazy: now... I'm getting confuse... it's a good one,u know? really good... that's what I called 'romantic scene that touch your heart'. you better realize now that u are also good in writing other than action.. not really mushy, but truly it's romantic. :good:
Rinrin wrote:Yeah, everybody is working way too hard! Everyone should be a lazy butt like me!:mrgreen: You better make sure you don't get sick too Betsy! :sweat:
Yep, I hope I won't get sick ... I'm afraid now !!!!! :sweat:
This crazy modern life is knocking the girls down ... :crazy:
Aw...Girls...thanks so much for your support. I'm feeling slightly better today...and quickly made one chapter....heheh...dun wan to let you guys down.....still kinda woozy and weak though....Aka-chan...you did a great job! You might not know....you can be the next romance queen as well! Diversified writer....Great job!!! I hope everyone is feeling fine....don't get sick like me....it sucks......everything that goes in....comes out the same way....ugh.....I'll be back with the next couple of chappies and hand it over to Aka.....need to work on the love triangle hahaha...
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Anger and Apologies :Couple 4- Okada and Pati
Okada and Pati were sitting opposite each other in the Temple’s own library. He had refused to switch on the lights and was staring at her through the little sunlight that had managed to seep through the thick and heavy curtains.
He had not moved or speak for the past half an hour and Pati herself couldn’t find the courage to speak up or look at him.
Finally, after what felt like ages, he sighed and moved slightly. “I guess old and ancient books isn’t really your specialty huh?” he broke the silence and Pati looked up at him.
“I….”she started to explain but he cut her off short.
“Yeah…what was I thinking….”he said bitterly. “Your specialty is being a professional liar and also playing with a guys feelings.”
Tears of pain and hurt started to form in Pati’s eyes. “I’m sorry…”she whispered, knowing that there wasn’t anything else she could say.
“Sorry? Right….”Okada stood up suddenly, and his chair fell backwards. “Sorry for what? I’m sure you don’t think that you’ve done anything wrong.”
He walked towards the window and flung the curtains open, letting in full sunlight. “Are you happy now?” he said softly. “Are you happy that you’ve managed to achieve what you had too?”
“NO!” Pati exclaimed. “I thought, I wouldn’t feel this way….I told myself I wouldn’t fall for you but I couldn’t. I fell fast and hard. Before I knew it, I was totally head over heels for you and I didn’t know what to do.”
Okada whirled around to face her and she saw one single tear streamed down his face. “LIAR!” he shouted and she winced. “How long do you want to lie to me? How much longer do you want to carry on with this cruel game you’re playing? Your sisters and you are the same. What are your intentions? WHAT?!”
Pati looked down at the floor and sighed softly. “We’ve never planned to hurt any of you guys. We only wanted our amulet back and to find out how who you guys were. We’re on the same side….”
“SAME SIDE?!” he was truly very hurt. Like a beast, when he’s hurt, he roared and shout and throw a tantrum to hide his pain. “YOU’RE SO WRONG.” He shouted. “Firstly, we will never ever treat the person we love the way you guys treated us. Secondly, we would never lie to get what we want. Thirdly, we would never play with other people’s feelings.”
“You’ve the right to be angry….”Pati said earnestly.
“Hell yeah!!!” he shot back.
Pati stood up and walked towards him bravely. “If there’s nothing more in the world that I could wish for right now is that I have the ability to turn back time. Then, I’ll make sure that I’ve never turned up in front of you and you’ll never feel anger or hate….” She said softly. “But I can’t…..and I’m really sorry. The moment you found out who we were, that’s when the lying stopped. When I sat in front of you at that table, for the first time in my life I wished…..I wished…..I never existed.”
Okada tore his eyes away from the window and looked at her. “I wished I never existed. I wished that I never felt what love was. I wished I never ever had to hurt you.”
He sighed loudly and ran his fingers through his baby soft hair. “Let me ask you one question.”
Pati nodded silently as she wiped her tears with her hands.
“Do you regret ever meeting me?” he asked softly.
“No…that’s the only thing I never regret…..”she answered.
“Do….do you really love me?”
“Yes…with all my living soul and being.”
Okada took a step closer to her and made her look at him. “Would you leave me?” he whispered as he lowered his head towards hers.
“Only if you want me too…”Pati replied.
“Can I kiss you?”
But before she can reply, his lips covered hers and gently kissed her. At that moment, Pati couldn’t help but feel as if she was the luckiest girl ever to be alive. Although not human, but she never thought she could ever feel this way about someone before. Okada, was not only good looking, but he was the most sweetest, most forgiving and kind person she ever met. But most of all, she loved him and he loved her.
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