Poem of the day!!

MY big brother writes poetry too
i love this line he says in a poem about his friends who died
"its like i feel a hush over the sky,
"touched by dead guys speaking"
hmmmm.......i need the rest of the poem
so u can understand.
my bro has such a great voice :dancing:
YEAAAHH!!! i love him
hooray for stupid big brothers!!! :dancing: :dancing:

i can flow too, ;)

what's it gonna take
for me to make that first move
what's true
what will make do
for me to view what i need to see
what will set it free
being the me i wanna be
what's gotta happen
how much hurt
til the first jump
how many more lumps
in my throat will i swallow
before i follow my dreams
how much more feeling in the dark
before i start
when will i make my mark
before my parts wear and tear
and i find no spares
what can i share
when will these stairs lead
being the me i wanna be
when will all the seams fit to place
when can i stand looking at my face
when will my soul take shape
what's it gonna take
to make the mediocore great
when will i change my luck
how do i suck all my guts
and chuck my faith into gear
when will i laugh in the presence of fear
what do i have to do
to live in sheer passion
how will i love
how do i transform all the warm
feelings and hidden meanings
how can i understand
what it takes to be a woman
when will i grow up
how many times must i throw up
before my spirit escapes
when will fate play
to the rhythms i choose
what's it gonna take
for me to make that first move
that step has always crept to light
but something always dies
something reels me shy
when will my tired sighs
turn to mighty breaths
in and exhales daring to fail
daring to live
how can i forget
how do i step forth without regret
when can i wake from a good night slept
instead of stirring from a bad night wept
how do i accept
when will i see what's next
stretch my neck and expose
when can i grow
when can i show
when will i know when the time is right
when will my confidence overthrow fright
i'm losing sight
my will to fight is choosing flight
i'm boozing my nights
diluting my cries
refusing to try
when will i focus
what's it gonna take
to make things clear
my dear friend
will i reach the bitter end
before i realize what choice to make
what's it gonna take
a tragedy
a loss
what cost must be rung
what lash of who's tongue
will bash your head to senses
what's it gonna take
what's gonna have to break
before you make your move
what's true
who are you
haven't a clue

i'm through

uh oh,
rap is a form of peotry too :dancing:
SOMETIMES

I cock and pop three in the air,
for my niggaz not here ,
Locked in with me,
your legacy lives on with me continously ,
tremendously I blow weed deep in my memory,
You still breathe,
your face show through your seeds,
And who would know one day you'd go so quick,
we all felt hopeless,
Through blunt smoke my pen spittin,
and I show this ,
A sworn oath you would know this,
I go the lengths
with my rap strengths,
when I think about my past friends
K-Rock and Diesel, Primo,
from the same block as me ,
since we was shorties,
they're paintin project glory,
I get touched,
it all absorb me like a weed head rush ,
Keepin it thorough for my past heroes ,
I must for my people,
street and physical,
I still see you ,
Featured in my heart,
sometimes it might wrinkle
Much drinkin when I'm thinkin,
it's like I feel a hush over the skies touched by dead guys speakin
:shamefulcry:

thats hella sad, you wrote that? reminds me of my ol' fren frankie who died in a drive by shooting :puppydog: i like these lines..

since we was shorties,
they're paintin project glory,
I get touched,
it all absorb me like a weed head rush ,
Keepin it thorough for my past heroes ,
I must for my people,
street and physical,
I still see you ,
Featured in my heart,

hehe do u do lyrical battles too?

lol, no i dont do battles!
you are crazy girl, but my brother does battles and he always wins :mrgreen:
he actually wrote that ryhme, its one of my favs.
i was inspired to write by him,
maybe u can download it and hear it
its a song called
"sometimes"
and its by an artist named noreaga,
he is featured in the song, his name is maze.
he isnt like a big rapper, but if u wanna hear him u can download it.
he isnt big er anything, but he is without a doubt my fav of all time :dancing:
MIX I SEE U GOT SUM TALENT YERSELF! :mrgreen:

ooh how can i not know noreaga?? hes pretty good! but i only have a few songs by him and some freestyle collabs, do u have the song by any chance? id like to hear it

thanks, i used to freestyle/singing back in hs for fun, specially when vmails were still 'in' heheh id record myself on the intros :mrgreen: i still sing and flow every now and then but not as much as before, i miss it though

lol, mixx id have never guessed it :mrgreen:
yeah i have the song, :victory:

yeh hook me up lol, thats good your bro had a collabo with him, the only rapper ive done collabs with was Kola from Doggy's Angels haha

sure, soon as i get home.
i wanna hear you too!

happy birthday somebody ! somewhere! :mrgreen:

Plum.
i am obsessed with a creature,
that im prone to impress,
whose satisfaction,
is my attraction,
and will settle for none less,
i paint portraits on the ceiling,
with my back against the floor,
though filled,
and past the limit,
i express, i want more,
your mere presence, or rather existence,
encourage me to take it on,
if i should miss one great thing,
which is anything,
this would sink into the ground,
and absorb the earth,
In which case, only one shoveled hand,
could grant me new birth,
not by choice,
i don't want to be,
alone, i am contemplating,
how not to be, happy,
i dot want to be,
its this cream,
that has weakened me,
how unfair would it be,
for us to exist and not know of each other,
An injustice at the least,
It is quite sad you know,
how happy one being, can make another,
the ability to perish without companionship,
must weaken the mind entirely,
the heart, though many,
is one of a kind,
Powerful enough to strengthen and stifle,
all at one time,
An incurable disease,
a conquering and almighty tease,
who's blushing bruises withstand much nurture,
and absorb much pain,
create a dirty puddle,
leaving behind a bluish circle,
An eternal inner stain,

Landing Light

"Itfs a long time since Ifve been knocked sideways
by a book of poems, but the life, energy, verbal precision and inventiveness of... Landing Light kept me awake at night."

:applaud:
im impressed

TANG wrote::applaud:
im impressed

me too!!! :applaud: :bow:

Game of Secrets

Speak clearly to my ear
Tell me the words of unknown
Give me the cry of air
Soar through the meadows

Pass it to others softly
Give him the clue of fate
The rhythm of mysteries
And the tensions in give

Whisper the splendor things
That the lips could slip
Scoop the fruits of sweetness
Show the spells that binds in it

Find a way to seek
To give one single break
And make another turn
To find out who's done...

The Mango Tree

We sat down at the greater shade
Where the wind has its calmness
Where the birds sing harmoniously
And the meadows was dancing

We talk under the shadow
About the things we need
About the reasons we have
That our dreams has its right

All the times we had together
Under the sun's ray of light
Over the darkness' fortress
That had long happened yesterday

That mango tree around there
The only witness of all
Where our wishes were built
Where the ruined things had gone...

Man of the Hour

It seems that you have the wisdom
That only the talenteds has
The words of the unknown
That sometimes the worse man has

The ryhme of the silence
And the melody of unspoken
Still searching fir the impossible
And the things that undiscovered

You had the will to listen well
About the battle of reasons
From the best words of the wise men
'Till the reign of the last war ends

The world of all facts
Where the regions could rely
Where the pigeons would fly
As the whell of life plays...

When in danger or in doubt
run in circles, scream and shout.

:bonk:

@ayalight

Wow.. man your poem's are good!! :hehe:

chrisyukiefan wrote:@ayalight

Wow.. man your poem's are good!! :hehe:

you think? i still have to learn a lot my friend but anyway, thanks :woot:

ayalight wrote:

you think? i still have to learn a lot my friend but anyway, thanks :woot:

man.. are you a novelist or what? hehehe :hehe: