GAZETTE

shiroi_tora wrote:

he cut her really badly...im talking about 2-3 inch deep wounds...wounds so bad that the nerve endings got damaged.

But a typical back would be only about an inch to the muscle. And it wouldn't really be bleeding. There's a thing called stitches. Stitches would heal in one WHOLE year.........just saying....

eheehehhee. sorry. I'm a bitch when it comes to critiquing writing. >.>'''

MomoPuff wrote:

But a typical back would be only about an inch to the muscle. And it wouldn't really be bleeding. There's a thing called stitches. Stitches would heal in one WHOLE year.........just saying....

eheehehhee. sorry. I'm a bitch when it comes to critiquing writing. >.>'''

obviously!!!! Ruining my story :banghead:

shiroi_tora wrote:

obviously!!!! Ruining my story :banghead:

Sorry!!!!! ^^; It's a habit. I'm picky........>.>'''' even if I'm still a junior high student.....

MomoPuff wrote:

Sorry!!!!! ^^; It's a habit. I'm picky........>.>'''' even if I'm still a junior high student.....

grrr....Anyways. Its still early in the story. There will be some drama between Alexis and Shinoda san

shiroi_tora wrote:
grrr....Anyways. Its still early in the story. There will be some drama between Alexis and Shinoda san

....so it's not a oneshot?

MomoPuff wrote:

....so it's not a oneshot?

no...i decided not to

shiroi_tora wrote:

no...i decided not to

ah. I think mine will be too long to be a oneshot. I'll write it all out and it'll become a multi chapter.

here's a preview of my story. They're all yakuza.

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Kai shifted uneasily into a fighting stance, his hand already on his sword. gKurotachi,h he spat. gAnd the leader, Hisagi. The yakuza who have been harassing the citizens. It was you wasnft it?h

The other man laughed again, this time more loudly and mockingly. gNow, now. No need to get rash.h On this, ten men surrounded Kai, laughing along with their boss. gYou know, I wasnft all that threatened when you guys showed up. You were small and you werenft growing any larger. But your rebellion against typical yakuza nature, how you treated civilians and how you protected those weakling bastards, that annoyed me. Your gang got an intimidating presence in the underground world, full of overly powerful fighters and your stupid caring nature – it felt as if you were another police force, aiming to demolish all yakuza gangs. You know what I felt when that happened?h

g...What?h he asked, his tone edgy.

A sadistic smile grew on his face, stretching the vibrant tattoo popping from his suit and climbing onto his face. gI wanted to cut you. I wanted to torture you as you screamed in pain for me to stop, drenching myself in your blood. I wanted to see your petty little gang membersf faces show fear and know fear of real yakuza. I wanted to soak the streets with your blood until the rivers ran red; to cut up your stomach and innards. I wanted to hear the squelch of all that blood underneath my feet. I wanted to hear your pleads and begs as I slice your friends open, one by one as you yourself are near the verge of death. I wanted to make you taste their blood in your mouth as they are sent to Hell before you. I want to immerse you in agony of the sadness of your friendsf deaths.h His eyes grew wide, even more sadistic, as if imagining the disgusting pleasure. He laughed hard, choking on his own saliva. gAnd your friend, Reita was it? I have special something for him.h

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....*coff* Such a sadistic boss. >.>''' this is the best I could do while listening to Otsuka Ai. Music effects my writing a lot. And ballads don't work for a suspenseful part......

I went to town today.... and... :shamefulcry:

THERE'S NO STACKED RUBBISH IN STOCK. grrrs~ was super angry .... their service was so.... :usuck:

The lastest album they have in stock for the GazettE are NIL, Disorder, and other old albums. and they didn't even sell the GazettE's live concerts DVDs/CDs..... *super disappointed!!!* I think STACKED RUBBISH will be in Singapore only next year. grrrrs~ :shamefulcry:

is the GazettE thinking that they aren't famous in Singapore? or it's the company's problem??? :shamefulcry: :shamefulcry: :shamefulcry: :shamefulcry: btw, i saw so many Zippo's lighter today. lols. kai's favourite

ah, I'm going to read that Kai's fantic story now. i just got home =) will give a feedback on it...

tissue-paper wrote:I went to town today.... and... :shamefulcry:

THERE'S NO STACKED RUBBISH IN STOCK. grrrs~ was super angry .... their service was so.... :usuck:

The lastest album they have in stock for the GazettE are NIL, Disorder, and other old albums. and they didn't even sell the GazettE's live concerts DVDs/CDs..... *super disappointed!!!* I think STACKED RUBBISH will be in Singapore only next year. grrrrs~ :shamefulcry:

is the GazettE thinking that they aren't famous in Singapore? or it's the company's problem??? :shamefulcry: :shamefulcry: :shamefulcry: :shamefulcry: btw, i saw so many Zippo's lighter today. lols. kai's favourite

ah, I'm going to read that Kai's fantic story now. i just got home =) will give a feedback on it...

If you want I can upload it so you have a copy until you get the hard copy.

@momo-chan nice story so far. I started to scream as the guy said that to Kai-sama....he hurts my KAi and I will kill him....hehe its early in the morning what can i say (8:39 am now)

It might be a couple of days before I start the second part of the fanfic. I have to do house work and I have a chemistry test today

shiroi_tora wrote:

If you want I can upload it so you have a copy until you get the hard copy.

@momo-chan nice story so far. I started to scream as the guy said that to Kai-sama....he hurts my KAi and I will kill him....hehe its early in the morning what can i say (8:39 am now)

It might be a couple of days before I start the second part of the fanfic. I have to do house work and I have a chemistry test today

I have downloaded all the songs in the Stacked Rubbish album... but.... I still want their album!!! :shamefulcry: I'll feel more happy if i get the hard copy :shamefulcry: ah, full album cost at $72...

it's 10.12pm at my place. hahas. I just got back home not long ago.

the fantic you wrote..... ah.... what is the meaning of "spasms" ??

ah, by the way, what is Yakuza?? :sweat:

shiroi_tora wrote:

If you want I can upload it so you have a copy until you get the hard copy.

@momo-chan nice story so far. I started to scream as the guy said that to Kai-sama....he hurts my KAi and I will kill him....hehe its early in the morning what can i say (8:39 am now)

It might be a couple of days before I start the second part of the fanfic. I have to do house work and I have a chemistry test today

lol...don't worry. No one is gonna die.....yet. *evil laughter*

ah, by the way, what is Yakuza?? Sweat

oh. they're the japanese mafia...but since most yakuza have tattoos, I kinda altered their role so they wouldn't have tattoos...[/quote]

'Momopuff' wrote:lol...don't worry. No one is gonna die.....yet. *evil laughter*

once again as long as it is not my kai I am ok

by the way there is a website called fanfiction.net I am going to post all my fanfics. Im going to delete the livejournal site

MomoPuff wrote:

ah... icic....

Shiroi-san : ahh, is it?? I wanted to write one on Ruki too.... but.... my essay-writing are very lousy... and my grammar. lols!! ah.... felt like writing one.... but... ah~

tissue-paper wrote:


ah... icic....

Shiroi-san : ahh, is it?? I wanted to write one on Ruki too.... but.... my essay-writing are very lousy... and my grammar. lols!! ah.... felt like writing one.... but... ah~

then right one now....dont worry about grammer. Ill make sure Momo-chan keeps her mouth closed on this one. :notell:

shiroi_tora wrote:
then right one now....dont worry about grammer. Ill make sure Momo-chan keeps her mouth closed on this one. :notell:

hahas, but it's good if people comments on the story. able to learn more... haas, but i felt like sleeping now. lols! I'm tired.... but if I lay on my bed now, I'm sure I won't be able to sleep. lols!

BTW, which section to look for the GazettE's fanfiction stories at the website???

tissue-paper wrote:BTW, which section to look for the GazettE's fanfiction stories at the website???

i havent checked it out completely...but i think you just post the fanfic under your pen name

shiroi_tora wrote:

i havent checked it out completely...but i think you just post the fanfic under your pen name

ah... ok. I just registered an account.... but I haven't receive the comfirmation e-mail for the activation.... *wait & wait & wait* hahas....